两宋·胡仔为张元干改词
传说张元干《渔家傲》词(钓笠披云青障绕)中有“撅头雨细春江渺”句，胡仔看后认为有晦涩之病，便把它改为“绿蓑雨细春江渺”，张元干欣然接受。胡仔《苕溪渔隐丛话》卷三十九：“张仲宗有《渔家傲》词。”“余往岁在钱塘，与仲宗从游甚久。仲宗手写此词相示，云：‘旧所作也。’其词第二句元是‘撅头雨细春江渺’，余谓仲宗曰：‘撅头虽是船名，今以雨衬之，语晦而病。’因为改作‘绿蓑雨细’，仲宗笑以为然。”
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